Speaking from Experience character design

After the first crit i was given the feedback that i should create a figurehead, who would take the role as an 'in your face' personal trainer. They said it would be funny, but also relevant if i was that character, as i am a frequent gym goer and have a bit of that 'gym freak' persona which i am not exactly proud to admit.

So i began looking at what my character would look like.
Here is the development.




This is not a definite route i will be taking of course. But for now it is something to be thinking about. It gives the product a a strong tone of voice. The only question i need to address is how far to take it. Further or bring it back.